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10 / IELTS ESSAYS AND LETTERS
There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the
possible causes that give rise to this phenomenon, and offer some feasible
recommendations.
Reporters in newspapers or magazines show an increasing number of
juvenile delinquents. To my mind, the causes of the worrying phenomenon
are difficult to isolate.
First of all, it is partly attributed to the disorder and non-self-discipline of
the media. In order to attract and hold more audience, violence is used
excessively in some TV shows and films. They have great influence on the
value system and behaviors of young people. Unable to distinguish between
reality and fiction, some teenagers who view shows in which violence is
very realistic, frequently repeated or unpunished, are prone to imitate what
they see. Another factor leading to juvenile delinquents comes from the
family. With the increasing of divorce rate, more and more teenagers live in
single-parent or step families. Their particular needs may be ignored and
hence feel hurt or isolated. In this condition they are susceptible to some
negative influences from bad friends and commit crimes.
Moreover, schools are also responsible for the increasing number of juvenile
delinquents. Most schools put subjects relevant to examinations as a high
place, but consider little about moral or law courses. It leads to the lack of
law awareness among students. They do not even realize some illegal
actions are against laws.
It is not easy to solve the problem immediately, which involves cooperation
of the whole society. The government must take strict measures to control
the media violence. The divorce couples should do their best to create a
warm family for their children. As to schools, it is important to pay more
attention to the moral and law education of students. We hope juvenile
delinquents will disappear under all the efforts.

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