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44 / IELTS ESSAYS AND LETTERS
Should parents put more time with their children?
In modern societies, both parents have their jobs. With the development of
economy, people tend to pursue high quality living conditions. Most of the
parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but
they seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point of view, no
matter how busy they are, they should make the best use of their time to stay
with their children.
First, the love between children and parents will be improved by spending
more time on their children. Children could feel parent’s affection through
the genial conversation and sharing their pleasure with them. Every time
when parents take them to a park, help them to prepare their birthday
parties, applaud for them when they are competing in the sports meeting, the
time they spend with children will become treasure in their memories.
Second, children need the direction from their parents. There are some
wrong behaviors in our society such as dishonesty, corruption, violence, and
so on. Children have weak resistance in defending this detrimental
influence. In this case, parents’ instructions seem to be very important to
children’s growth. Parents should sit down and talk with their children about
what they should do and what they should not do. In addition, if parents
often spend time in staying with their children, adults’ good behavior will
greatly influence their children.
However, it should not be forgotten that there are some disadvantages in
spending too much time on children. Some parents restrict their children,
and give them little freedom to develop their interests. Therefore, I
emphasize that parents should educate and instruct their children
appropriately in their spare time apart from their busy works.

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