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IELTS ESSAYS AND LETTERS / 59
More and more women go out to work. Is it the government's
responsibility to subsidize them and provide free staff and facilities to care
for their children? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
The rapid development of economy and society results in the significant
improvement of women's social status. More and more women, confined to
baby-sitting and chores previously, have stepped out of their family and
become career women. But in the meantime, career women are confronted
with considerable nuisances, one of which is baby caring.
Women's participation in the employment contributes a great deal to the
society. Thanks to women's patience, warmth and carefulness, most women
are employed as secretaries, nurses, consultants, baby sitters, and many
other important jobs. But due to the pressure from work and family, they
cannot concentrate themselves fully on their work. Some countries and
governments adopted some active measures to resolve the contradiction,
such as the policy of feasible working time which renders women some
freedom. However, this is not a radical solution.
From my point of view, the government should subsidize women in baby
caring and provide charge-free facilities and working staff to relieve women
of their pressure. On the one hand, women can focus themselves on their
work and study, with no distraction from their family and children. In
return, factories and companies can benefit a lot from the practice of
subsidiary, which exempts them from the losses caused by female
absentees. On the other hand, children enjoy the right of education. Many
countries give priority to children's education, providing children with free
elementary schooling, which not only popularizes knowledge but also
cultivates skilled talent for the society. Besides, the United Nations have
issued relevant laws and regulations with a view to protecting children's
educational right.
To sum up, the government should spare no efforts to relieve women of
their burden and shoulder the responsibility of children's education, which is
not only the government's obligation but also people's appeal.

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