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BRIANSTORM IDEAS
Problem
Solution
air pollution – greenhouse effect-
less cars & lorries
transport
exhaust fumes – traffic – people use cars all
electric cars – cleaner fuel
the time
use public transport or walk or cycle
factories -toxic wastes – sewage - poison
new laws – treat wastes & sewage – clean
rivers & sea
dangerous for sea animals – destruction of
water – protect ecosystems
ecosystems
rd
fossil fuels – greenhouse effect – acid rain -
renewable energy – hydro power – wind
3
idea:
energy
harmful
turbines – solar power - clean
SELECT IDEAS & THIN K O F LIN KERS
Environmental pollution
Introduction
Linkers:
……….is one of the biggest problems the world faces today – many people are
concerned about
Problem:
air pollution – cars – drive short distances
Solution:
drive less – cycle or walk
Paragraph 2
Linkers:
Firstly, nowadays, by doing this, therefore, consequently
Problem:
factories – toxic waste – dangerous for marine life
Solution:
strict laws & fines – factories treat waste
Paragraph 3
Linkers:
Secondly, according to, as well as, for instance, in addition
Problem:
fossil fuels – energy for factories
Solution:
renewable energy - cleaner
Paragraph 4
Linkers:
Finally, for example, furthermore
all these actions are solutions
Conclusion
Linkers:
In conclusion, I believe that ……..
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