English Grammar Worksheet - Improving A Paragraph

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Improving a Paragraph
Rewrite the paragraph below making changes as necessary to improve the wording and/or flow.
Day 1
- What skill are you the best at?
The skill I’m most good at is knot tying. I don’t mean like little shoelace knots either, though I am pretty good at those
too, I mean big giant knots one time my brother asked me to tie him up with one of my knots cause he thought he
could get out but after 30 minutes of trying he couldn’t even loosen it I think that definetly means my knot trying
skills are the best around.
Suggestions: Punctuation, run on sentences, spelling
Day 2 -
What is your favorite subject and why?
My favorite subject is math. Math? Yep, math. While I no some people don’t like it for me its like solving a puzzle.
Your given a couple of the puzzle pieces and then you have to put them together in the right order to find the answer.
Sure its hard sometimes, but that feeling when you solve a difficult problem is just so awesome!
Suggestions: Grammar, reiterate ending
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