English Grammar Worksheet - Improving A Paragraph

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Improving a Paragraph

Rewrite the paragraph below making changes as necessary to improve the wording and/or flow.

Day 1

- What did you do last night?

Me and my friends went to the state fair last night. We went on a lot of rides. We went on the roller coaster.

We went on the bumper cars. My favorite ride was the ferris wheel. I can’t wait to go back.

Suggestions: Reiterate, Sequencing, exciting words, grammar

Day 2 -

What is your favorite video game?

My favorite game of all time is Pokémon. Mario is also a fun game. Pokémon is about catching little

monsters and fighting them and exploring. There are hundreds of monsters to collect. I can play it for hours.

It’s the best game ever!

Suggestions: Omitting unnecessary info, clarifying statements

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