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AFTER

Data analysts at Google have the added opportunity and challenge of recommending

Introduces main idea

solutions for the data problems they encounter. I am prepared for the distinct

Unifies all qualifications

problem-solving facet of this position because I received unique training from CMU’s

under the main idea of

Statistics program, where I practiced applying statistical knowledge in the workplace. I

“problem solving”

have acquired the communication skills necessary to present solutions to Product

Managers, Sales Associates, Engineers, and Marketing Teams through my coursework

and current project of working with a variety of clients to find data-driven solutions. In

addition to reporting solutions, I have completed four actuarial exams – P, MLC, FM and

C – and acquired the problem-solving skills to analyze and interpret large data sets

through my experience in hierarchical regression analysis of multilevel models.

5. Utilize white space.

You should provide ample white space (parts of the page left without text) in your application essay

with at least 1” margins, short paragraphs and readable type (at least 12 pt). Employers and recruit-

ers who read hundreds of application essays do not want to read documents that look crowded or

lengthy. Respect your readers’ position and provide a visually inviting document.

At a glance, which application essay do you find more inviting?

The advice in this handout is compiled from the career and/or writing centers and admissions representatives of several

institutions including Purdue University OWL, U. of Central Missouri, CMU, U. of Michigan American Culture Dept., UC

Berkeley, Claremont Graduate U., U. Chicago Graduate School of Business, Northwestern U. Graduate School of Man-

agement, UCLA School of Law, Cornell U. Medical College, Washington U. School of Medicine, as well as posts by Ryan

Hickey and Geoffrey Cook from the EssayEdge Blog.

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