Has the writer used credible sources? Where can support (quotes, examples, facts, figures, etc.) be added?
Where does the writer need to explain the supporting details more clearly?
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Do the transitions help the reader move from one idea to another?
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What is the best part of the essay? Why?
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What is the weakest part? Why?
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Is the tone formal? Which words are too casual?
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Does the essay end effectively?
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