Writing Assessment: Paragraph Worksheet - Miracosta College Page 23
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31place since 2001. I have shared this place with my daughters and my
friends. This place makes me feel happy and relaxed.
My Favorite Place
My favorite place is my living room. It is located on the first floor
in my house next to the stairs. It has a sofa, a T.V, and a chair, my living room
has been my favorite place since I have lived in my current residence, for five
years. I like this place because I relax I can think, and I watch T.V. there. I have
shared this place with my family and friends. I usually spend one hour a day in
this special place. In conclusion, this place makes me feel happy and relaxed
because my family is there.
My Favorite Place
My favorite place is The Palomar Mountains. I fell relaxed and happy
there,because it is far away and quiet. It is located in North County near Valley
Center and Santa Isabela. In the winter it looks beautiful because it has a lot of
snow,tall trees, and animals. I found it when I was working in construction in the
are and I started lookig around ane day during my break. I arrived there for the
first time on December 5,2003.I have shared this place twice a year with all my
family, at Christmas,We always have a party day in the Palomar Mountains. This
place makes me feel joyful because we enjoy special days together there.
My Cozy Room
My favorite place is my bedroom in my house because it is a very
quiet,relaxing,and cozy place.It is a common bedroom with a bed,TV,DVD
player,chair,stereo,and a little bookshelf.It is the place where I spend my five
days of the week watching TV,listening to music,and reading.My room has been
my favorite place for three years.I have rarely shared this place with others.This
place makes me feel relaxed and cozy and that is why it is my favorite place for
now.
My Relaxing Place
My favorite place is the park because it is a place with a lot of activitiy. It is
natural and beautiful where people can walk to breathe the air. I spend a lot of
time there with my friends. It is the place where I have fun. The park has
been my favorite place for a long time now. I have sometimes shared
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Intermediate Level Writing Outcome:
Paragraph
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