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46. Unless your readers are familiar with your terminology, avoid writing strings
of nouns (or noun strings!).
a. patient program satisfaction
b. student-professor relationship factors
c. processing step change
d. competitive cotto salami performance test
e. program implementation process evaluation
f. MHS has a hospital employee relations improvement program.
g. MHS has a program to improve employee relations.
h. MHS has a program to improve relations among employees.
7. Eliminate unnecessary prepositional phrases.
a. The opinion of the working group.
b. The working group's opinion.
c. The obvious effect of such a range of reference is to assure the audience of the
author's range of learning and intellect.
8. Avoid unnecessarily inflated words.
Instead of
Use
cognizant of
aware of, know
facilitate
help
impact on
affect
implement
start, create, carry out, begin
subsequent to
after
utilize
use
9. Put wordy phrases on a diet.*
Instead of
Use
the reason for
for the reason that
due to the fact that
owing to the fact that
because, since, why
considering the fact that
on the grounds that
this is why
despite the fact that
regardless of the fact that
although, even though
in the event that
if it should transpire/happen that
if
under circumstances in which
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